Most people when marketing themselves or their business go and on about how they have made money and in the process they loss their readers. A good advert needs to be short, elaborate and straight to the point. This way you will catch the attention of the people who will read your advertisements.
By all means be proud of your success but for the purpose of clarity do not dwell on your achievements for you may end up losing prospective clients’ interest. To some extend you also end up being ambiguous. But I cannot ignore the fact that narrating about your achievement helps to motivate others.
My advice is that you can mention about your successes in one or two lines and then reserve the details of your adverts to talk about what you have to offer. The essence of an advert is to create an interest in your product or service. People appreciate interesting and detailed stuff; this will draw the attention of your targeted audience.
The disadvantage of being too wordy is that you may cause your readers to loss track of what you are trying to pass on. Try to ensure that your adverts are interesting so that people read through to the end and at the same time they should understand your message.
Business promotion can be a tricky affair but if you can get it right then you are on your way to making money. Research the market trends by conducting a market analysis and also seek advice from experts before you run your adverts.
Source by Stephen